Wednesday, April 19, 2017

Butterfly project




I've met enough people.
Seldom a human being.
Therefore, I will wait
until my life's purpose
is fulfilled
and you will come.

Though there is anguish
deep in my soul --
what if I must search for you forever? --
I must not lose faith,
I must not lose hope.


14 comments:

  1. I really like your butterfly and the design of the butterfly.i also like how you wrote hope when the people were hugging each other it also looks like you took time to make your butterfly because it has a lot of detail.

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  2. Wow. I love the writing style, the pictures, everything is amazing! I see some hands, two individuals hugging, and some trees. I like this poem, because this person has faith and hope. Your drawing in the middle does remind me of a deep deep soul. What made you come up with that idea? Maybe because you're very creative.

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  3. " I will wait
    until my life's purpose
    is fulfilled
    and you will come." Talking about waiting to meet that special person. I like the design with the people hugging showing they love each other. What do you think about the blog Leslie? Answer your probably wondering if this child might have fallen in love with someone.

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  4. I really liked your butterfly you put a lot of details and I also like your poem because it said like in the almost last lines it said. "Must not lose faith I must no lose hope" in the butterfly in
    Ike the map that you putted there

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  5. Your butterfly looks very nice. Great job. I like how you used words to go along with the poem. Do you think the child dies based on the poem? After reading the poem it makes me feel like the child is very positive and chooses not to give up. I agree with you when you said on your thinglink that the authors purpose is to never give up because at the end of the poem it says " I must not lose faith, I must not lose hope"

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  6. Your butterfly looks so nice, and your poem is a great one, and I thinked that the ppem looks a happy poem because they are talk about some nice things and I think that your butterfly is going to survive because every thing in the butterfly is about good and happy things.

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  7. I really like your butterfly! I liked how you drew the two people. Also how you drew hands to represent skin tones from different people. Why did you outline the outside black? I think you did that because the person who wrote this poem is in a bad dark situation. I like how in one of your annotations, you said it reminded you so much of it.

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  8. Wow, I really like your butterfly! You have a great talent in drawing and creativity. I really like your poem as well. Your author is really an inspiration to follow and a positive person. He says not to give up hope and is truly positive when speaking. If this is the case then why did you draw the anxiety and pain in black on your left wing?

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  9. Nice butterfly! I really like the designs you drew and the colors.I really liked the one picture, where you drew Faith and the yellow made it better.I also like how you faded on the picture with rain distress or anxiety that looks cool on how you fade,the behind the girl.The line I like the most from your dots was This picture in the center is drawn because in the text it says "deep in my soul" and this picture reminded me so much of it. I really like how you combined it really along with it.

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  10. I really love your butterfly so much i happening in your butterfly. Great job. Your poem was very deep

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  11. Wow!! Your butterfly is gorgeous! I love the drawings the details in your drawings I can tell you used your time wisely. Why do you think in your poem it says "what if I must search for you forever?" I think this means that the author must have liked or loved someone before they ere taken to the camp and now this poem is a letter stating on that they would never lose them and there going to find each other when they are let go of the camps.

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  12. I really like your poem. It has a lot of details I like the designs. I could see that you put a lot of effort in it.

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  13. I like the drawing its spo great and nice also the writing is very nice. This is amazing and the part where it talks about not losing faith and hope is very powerful because many lost hope and faith. Its deep for someone to lose hope wich we don't see very often and its sad when someone loses hope and just gives up. Did you had someone help you with this? because its great.

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  14. The drawing represent a lot abou what she is talking about

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